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I quite enjoy the chaos
That strange desire for my heart to skip a beat
Falling into that unusual pit of silence
That soothing silence

That feeling of peace
Oblivious to the world
What a unique beauty you seem to be
And I must admit it's something I never realized

What I began to live for
This sudden change of pace leaves me caught in your eyes
Locked away in your gaze
Slowly being dragged through that rabbit hole again

And I have no desire to escape
No efforts to find what was once my reality
To keep the dream alive
To keep myself enchained to an enchanted slumber

A sweet sacrificial heart beats slowly to your hums
That beautiful melody
One wonderous harmony
As she sways in the wind

To admit such a thing would be painful
To admit such a desire would be such sweet release
Such undoubting rapture
To lose control.....just this one time.
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wickdgrl14 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011  Student General Artist
Wow...jus..wow
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EvanescentMind Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011
Good?
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Nghts1lk3r Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011
Interesting concept. It kinda seems like you (the speaker) want to be able to bow down, yet stand tall at the same time. Like you're stuck in a contradiction, and you don't know the way out...
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EvanescentMind Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011
Yes that's pretty much the concept, actually.
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Nghts1lk3r Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011
Ach. Sorry that I couldn't draw my own conclusions about the piece, besides what I was led by the hand to see.
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EvanescentMind Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011
Well it's pretty much a unisex interpretation of someone who isn't used to falling love, doesn't want to fall in love, fights it- Eventually come to the conclusion that that need to allow themselves to be romantically happy
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Nghts1lk3r Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011
Haha. That almost sounds like me. Except for that last bit.
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EvanescentMind Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011
What part?
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Nghts1lk3r Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011
I forget...
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EvanescentMind Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011
What I get for answering a week later huh? Haha sry
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