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Love and Promises
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You repeat those same words….
Over and over
"I love you"
I can feel my whole body tense
And I can't breathe
The air just escapes me….
You ask me to promise you
"Never leave" you said
And I promise that I won't
To never leave
And stay here
For as long as my heart still beats
And I never break my promises
Especially not to you
Whom I can never stop loving
For you I'm on my knees
My heart beating so fast
And I can't catch my breath…
And still keep that promise
The one locked in my heart
Until I breathe no more....
Over and over
"I love you"
I can feel my whole body tense
And I can't breathe
The air just escapes me….
You ask me to promise you
"Never leave" you said
And I promise that I won't
To never leave
And stay here
For as long as my heart still beats
And I never break my promises
Especially not to you
Whom I can never stop loving
For you I'm on my knees
My heart beating so fast
And I can't catch my breath…
And still keep that promise
The one locked in my heart
Until I breathe no more....
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It was a pain story to me, and then I read your author's comment. Lol it's all about perspective!